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The Bitter End by RohanElf The Bitter End by RohanElf
"PETER! Oh God Peter! Run! RUN! They're everywhere!"
Peter stood stock still until Lucius appeared in the doorway, "Well done Pettigrew."
Marlene stared, "No!" she started crawling backwards away from the house, her hair clinging to her face and neck from the rain. Bellatrix appeared behind Lucius, "
NO!" Marlene screamed again, "NO! PETER HOW COULD YOU?!"
Peter looked away.
Bellatrix walked up to Marlene and grasped her around the neck. She was surprisingly strong and lifted Marlene by the neck up against the tree trunk behind her, "And now I shall finish what I begun, I should have killed you long ago when I had the chance!" she whispered removing her mask, there was a terrifying gleam in her eyes. She raised her wand to Marlene's temple, "Last words McKinnon?"
Marlene could barely breath, she choked and tried to draw a breath, "Bring it on, Bellabitch!" she croaked.
Something twitched in Bellatrix's jaw, "
AVADA KEDAVRA!"




Scribbled with a ballpoint pen and white-out on the train...also Ive done something odd to Marlzy's face but have yet to pinpoint what it is exactly..
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AllyCardinale Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
this is interseting, is there an fanfic i could read
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AuroraCookie Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
AAAAAAA! :(:(:( :'(

<3
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Fandomaniac Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Go Marlzy! Best line ever. I like Peter as a Marauder, but he really is a prat after school :backstab:
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DevinJamie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2008
Oh yeah. And I love that she called her BellaBitch. It made me think of this girl I know at school.
See, I love basically everyone. There are two people I don't like. And I REALLY don't like them.
One boy, one girl.
I call the girl HannahBitch. =)
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL!!!!!!! Niiiiiiiiice!
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DevinJamie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2008
PEN and WHITE-OUT? On a MOVING train?!!?!
Why can't I share some of that talent? Unfair, I tell you. UNFAIR. Not a funfair. Unfair.

This is great =)
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Talent... fluke... same diff :P
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DevinJamie Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008
yeah, yeah. sure, sure.

Oh God. I just looked back at it again, and read the author's comments. And now I kind of want to cry.
Gawuhddd, HP makes me so freaking emotional.
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
haha its just cos you're really attached to the characters
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DevinJamie Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008
But I don't even know Marlene!

But, yes, I am attached...addicted...same thing.
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