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The Bitter End by RohanElf The Bitter End by RohanElf
"PETER! Oh God Peter! Run! RUN! They're everywhere!"
Peter stood stock still until Lucius appeared in the doorway, "Well done Pettigrew."
Marlene stared, "No!" she started crawling backwards away from the house, her hair clinging to her face and neck from the rain. Bellatrix appeared behind Lucius, "
NO!" Marlene screamed again, "NO! PETER HOW COULD YOU?!"
Peter looked away.
Bellatrix walked up to Marlene and grasped her around the neck. She was surprisingly strong and lifted Marlene by the neck up against the tree trunk behind her, "And now I shall finish what I begun, I should have killed you long ago when I had the chance!" she whispered removing her mask, there was a terrifying gleam in her eyes. She raised her wand to Marlene's temple, "Last words McKinnon?"
Marlene could barely breath, she choked and tried to draw a breath, "Bring it on, Bellabitch!" she croaked.
Something twitched in Bellatrix's jaw, "
AVADA KEDAVRA!"




Scribbled with a ballpoint pen and white-out on the train...also Ive done something odd to Marlzy's face but have yet to pinpoint what it is exactly..
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:iconallycardinale:
AllyCardinale Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
this is interseting, is there an fanfic i could read
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AuroraCookie Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
AAAAAAA! :(:(:( :'(

<3
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Fandomaniac Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Go Marlzy! Best line ever. I like Peter as a Marauder, but he really is a prat after school :backstab:
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DevinJamie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2008
Oh yeah. And I love that she called her BellaBitch. It made me think of this girl I know at school.
See, I love basically everyone. There are two people I don't like. And I REALLY don't like them.
One boy, one girl.
I call the girl HannahBitch. =)
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
LOL!!!!!!! Niiiiiiiiice!
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:icondevinjamie:
DevinJamie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2008
PEN and WHITE-OUT? On a MOVING train?!!?!
Why can't I share some of that talent? Unfair, I tell you. UNFAIR. Not a funfair. Unfair.

This is great =)
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Talent... fluke... same diff :P
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:icondevinjamie:
DevinJamie Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008
yeah, yeah. sure, sure.

Oh God. I just looked back at it again, and read the author's comments. And now I kind of want to cry.
Gawuhddd, HP makes me so freaking emotional.
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
haha its just cos you're really attached to the characters
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:icondevinjamie:
DevinJamie Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008
But I don't even know Marlene!

But, yes, I am attached...addicted...same thing.
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SheStang Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
xD I portay Marlene in a Role Play site, and this is the best thing ever xD
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Hahaha very cool :D this is from a FanFic I wrote a couple of years ago with Marl in it :D
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SheStang Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
xD Ah I see. Marlene was a good under character.
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my-piano Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2007
I just started reading DT! I'm looooooving it!! (chapter 7 now) But that's a sad end for Marlene... :'( But I love the way she called her 'Bellabitch' xD But you know she really IS a bitch!
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Hahaha im glad you're enjoying it so far! You have a long way to go yet before anything terrible bad happens though ;)
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ZenoRaziel Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
*applauds* Well done! I don't think you could have brought out more life out of your own words ^_^ It's great!
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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:iconzenoraziel:
ZenoRaziel Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
de nada :dygel:
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Very nice work! :)
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks :D
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stayfrostysparky Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Holy Hell, that's a lot of ball point pen...

And Ooh!!! I just realised that this is the one I saw!!! And I was like "I likes the roses on her dress" and you were like "They're penguinses." D:D
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
yeap
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:iconmuse21:
Muse21 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Well, if this isn't something for the older fanbase! You know reading the first time... I cried.
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:iconmuse21:
Muse21 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
No! That's a good thing. It means you were a skilled writer!
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
:( :( sorry!
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fiery-chicken Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW! But I don't remember who Marlene McKinnon is...grrr
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
she was part of the original Order of the Phoenix
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:iconfiery-chicken:
fiery-chicken Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH! DUH Nova! :facepalm: Shoulda remembered that
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
;)
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Emmab619 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Marlz :(
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
:hug:
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Joan-Ivy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
The perspective is awesome, I agree on Marlene's face but it looks great anyway! :lol:
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah can you work out what I've done to it? I know the problem is its to flat but I tried to fix it several times an it kept turning out like that... oh well. Meh its just a train scribble lol
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:iconjoan-ivy:
Joan-Ivy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
No, I can't! ( <-- very bothering) :shakefist: Don't worry about it!
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
hahaha okid dokie
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Joan-Ivy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
:) I've posted the Art Meme you tagged me with btw, in case you wanna look.
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
sweet! *runs to look*
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t-bone-tory Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
ooh! i really like this!!
*pats you on the back for awesome work yet again*
i would LOVE to read more of the writing in the notes!!!
Where can i read more! sounds really good!!
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww I'm glad you like it! you can find the whole story (be warned: its LONG) on quizilla under the rohanelf username. Its called Destend Tragedy
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t-bone-tory Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Ahh! I love Quizilla!
Will do :D
And not to worry, i love long stories!!
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
;)
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Carcraaash Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007
You've done it again
:+fav:
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
aww thankyou!!
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Carcraaash Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
No problem ^__^
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MonkeeSox212 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2007
.... Marzly. :(
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
:hug:
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MonkeeSox212 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
:hug: I cried when she died....
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:iconrohanelf:
RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
sorry ^^;
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MonkeeSox212 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
And I KNEW it was going to happen, and yet it was sooo sad. =[

Oh well. xD
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RohanElf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
:(
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