Very Bella-ish. The chipped nail-polish and the bracelets and the skintone is perfect.
Maybe I missed a rant somewhere but why do you hate bella? I think she's okay throughout the first book and in the second, third and last one the only characters to survive the soap opera with their honour intact is, in my opinion, Jasper and Emmett so I didn't bother after that.
I think everyone does that every now and then Its funny because I part-own a production company and both the Director and myself art dyslexic so posters and scripts are always terrible because we keep doing the 'can you proof read this?' and remember we're as bad as eachother and have to call someone else to help us
Ahahah, that must be terrible. I dunno why, but I'm always ridiculously anal about correcting things that people give me to read, but I never know whether they want me to just tell them it's awesome, if they want my honest editor-ish input, or if they just want me to fix their grammatical mistakes. I always end up doing the wrong one and getting pouted at.
As much as i loathe (i know, harsh) the twilight series, this is a freaking amazing piece of work, really. five stars. especially because of the fact that she looks so different from everyone else's Bella